Sell the shift, not just the state
This is a page we designed for a proposal to restore a public building (the restoration work will finish in 2028). Even if we're not designers, we can learn from this composition.
The left side (sketched, orderly, minimal) evokes planning, control, and even nostalgia. It speaks to logic and legacy. The right side (colorful, textured, lively) evokes arrival, emotion, and presence. It speaks to vision, possibility, and community. We intended the contrast to show a timeline but also to deliver a feeling of becoming.
In business communication, this teaches us: Don't just show what is. Show what is becoming.
Show the before, then the after, and don't stop there. Let the transition be the message. The brain stays alert when there is implied movement, and progression can definitely be persuasive.