In a recent presentation, we were helping a client visualize the notion of unclear messaging for sales teams. While visually appealing, the first version is not a good metaphor because, for the most part, trains do know which tracks to follow. In addition, the tracks offer a clear, binary path forward, which may oversimplify the complexity of real-world messaging issues. The design also felt fairly impersonal. The top-down perspective creates a detached observer role, which can feel passive. Given that the presentation was for sales teams, which thrive on personal connections, we reasoned that the visual should be more personal.
So, in the second version, the fog, combined with the obscured signpost and cyclist's perspective, introduces uncertainty and relatability – which connect better with the idea of “unclear messaging.” The handlebars of the bicycle place the audience in the role of the decision-maker and add to the tension of the situation.
So, for your next communication material, can you incorporate a first-person perspective to immerse your audience even better in your design?