When your title holds you back
A few weeks ago, I shared a sequence of title slides for a presentation we were developing introducing B2B sellers to a software application that promised to help them make important content visible. The original slide, with its abstract, blurry background and dotted text, failed to connect with the audience. While it hinted at a "The Hidden Problem," it lacked a tangible connection to the actual pain point—content clarity.
After a few iterations, in the final version, we visualized a concrete example of a polarized lens to show contrast between clarity and lack of it. One of the advantages of polarized lenses is that they remove glare, helping people see a scene better. The metaphor of the lens filtering noise aligned perfectly with the software’s value proposition: helping sellers and buyers see what matters. The script for the presenter was: ‘…just as polarized lenses strip away the glare to reveal a better picture, effective sales tools should strip away unnecessary noise to reveal clear and relevant content to sellers and buyers.”
This shift in visual storytelling demanded a new title, "The Missing Lens," which better complemented the analogy and made the intent of the presentation more obvious, too.
Key takeaway: If you struggle to visualize abstract titles effectively, consider rethinking the title itself. A refined title paired with a relatable visual can transform abstract ideas into a stronger hook for the audience.