This "before and after" comes from the presentation we created for an architecture/construction team when they were competing to win a mental health facility redesign. Their goal wasn’t just to build a healthcare space—it was to create important housing for struggling young adults. The challenge was convincing decision-makers that this was a housing project, not just a construction project.
The first slide presents a clean, structured look—John, well-dressed, standing confidently, framed by simple line-art suggesting a living space. While it conveys stability, it lacks emotional depth. It tells us that John lives here, but does it make us feel why that matters?
The second slide shifts everything. Now, John is seated alone on the street, head down, vulnerable. The contrast between his current reality and the possibility of a home deepens the emotional connection. This visual grounds the narrative, making it clear: This isn’t just about buildings—it’s about changing lives.
Here are some guidelines to consider in your own communication design: Make vulnerability visible—positioning and body language matter if you're using people photos. Tell a transformation story—unfinished elements signal opportunity.